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Broken Build: Silicon Valley Romantic Suspense (Chance for Love Book 1) Kindle Edition
When a woman wrongs a man… can a man forgive and love?
Jen Jones hides a horrible secret behind her new degree, toned body, and exciting job at Silicon Valley’s hottest startup—until a man linked to her past is killed in a hit-and-run.
CEO and founder Dave Jewell is about to land a huge deal. He doesn't need blood on his car, threatening phone calls, and Jen wrapped in broken code and blackmail.
A gang of thugs hunts Jen, and she takes refuge in Dave’s protective arms. Together, they must thwart a killer and rescue an innocent victim from their past.
Love blossoms, but a damaging revelation points straight at Jen, threatening to tear them apart forever.
- LanguageEnglish
- Publication dateSeptember 11, 2012
- File size4401 KB
Editorial Reviews
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I found out the main character is an engineer - and a female - so of course that drew me in immediately and I was hooked! So much suspense and drama in the book! The book kind of reminds me a bit of the Girl with the Dragon Tattoo - which is one of my favorites. Strong female lead, technical stuff going on, smart ladies, ACTION! - Concert Katie
Just when I thought I had figured out one piece of the puzzle another character was introduced or something in the story shifted and I was completely thrown off balance... Last night I was reading, it was almost 1:00 AM and I said out loud... to the couch, apparently, since nobody else was awake... I can't figure out "who done it." Come on... you know the old line attached to all mysteries... WHO DONE IT!?! - Griffin's Honey
Right from the get-go you can't help but feel that trouble just follows Jen Jones around. The chemistry between Jen and David is right there from the beginning. Even David has a secret... - Busy Bumble Bee
As a mystery/thriller fan I am used to playing the detective game myself as the plot progresses. With every twist I was forced to reevaluate and suspect a different character and by the three quarter of the book I had suspected each character at least once. - Book Reviews by DDS
Rachelle Ayala wove a love story that wasn't a fairy tale and mixed it with enough suspense that I didn't want to put the book down! Broken Build radiated forgiveness, faith, and love & taught the readers how forgive as well. - Cherry Lemonade
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Jen Jones hides a horrible secret behind her new degree, toned body, and exciting job at Silicon Valley's hottest startup--until a man linked to her past is killed by a hit-and-run.
CEO and founder Dave Jewell is about to land a huge deal. He doesn't need blood on his car, threatening phone calls, and Jen wrapped in broken code and blackmail.
A gang of thugs hunts Jen, and she takes refuge in Dave's protective arms. Together, they must thwart a killer and rescue an innocent victim from their past. Love blossoms, but a damaging revelation points straight at Jen, threatening to tear them apart forever.
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Product details
- ASIN : B0099MLND8
- Publisher : Lovely Hearts Press; 2nd edition (September 11, 2012)
- Publication date : September 11, 2012
- Language : English
- File size : 4401 KB
- Simultaneous device usage : Unlimited
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Sticky notes : On Kindle Scribe
- Print length : 332 pages
- Best Sellers Rank: #1,902,088 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- #3,089 in Technothrillers (Kindle Store)
- #3,193 in Women's Crime Fiction
- #5,847 in Technothrillers (Books)
- Customer Reviews:
About the author
Rachelle Ayala is an award-winning USA Today bestselling author of contemporary romance and romantic suspense. She writes emotionally challenging stories but believes in the power of love and hope.
Her book, Knowing Vera, won the 2015 Angie Ovation Award, and A Father for Christmas garnered a 2015 Readers' Favorite Gold Award. Christmas Stray was awarded the 2016 Readers' Favorite Gold Award and A Pet for Christmas had an Honorable Mention. In 2017, Playing for the Save won Readers' Favorite Gold Award in Realistic Fiction.
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David Jewell is obsessed with finding his daughter, kidnapped as a baby from his house. He believes his dead wife's family stole their daughter. He needs enough money to find the girl, now age six. He doesn't know his software engineer is the woman he blames for the girl's abduction.
Jen's blackmailer is murdered and the kidnappers of David's child demand a copy of the code that might make him rich. Jen and David are thrown together and soon develop a strong attraction. Trouble is that Jen can't love this man because she knows he'll hate her when her identity is revealed.
This complicated plot weaves many lives together, springing surprises along the way, just like a complex computer system. The answers to all the riddles might heal or they might blow everything apart. The "broken build" is a delicate problem to solve. Can Jen work a miracle? Will her skills mend broken lives or is she facing more broken promises? She must be courageous in the face of pain and danger.
I enjoyed learning about the intricate process of completing a software "build" and the "techy" terms did not interfere with my enjoyment of this well-written suspense. You can see that the author knows her subject well and portrays her characters with great skill.
This is a book that requires good attention: the pace is swift, the writing skilled, the characters (many) are succinctly drawn, the techno jargon just enough to be comprehensible, and the love affair between Jen and her boss loaded with enough ups and downs to keep you guessing.
Broken Build is well written and edited although the number of characters and plot twists are somewhat confusing - and at times credibility is stretched - and for that reason I was tempted to a 3-star rating but in all honestly I was impressed by the writing and the fact that the author worked hard to make this a really intriguing read. This is not light reading, nor is it for the fainthearted. It's a tough story glanced with both violence and tenderness - but it is a book that will hold its intrigue and suspense to the end. And that's all a thriller lover needs.
With a new look and a new job, computer-savvy Jen Jones is determined to make up for past mistakes--blackmail and murder notwithstanding.
Though not above using rich, married women to help fund is new venture, Dave Jewel is still grieving his deceased wife and the disappearance of his only child. He harbors great resentment toward the woman he believes is responsible. Little does he know that woman now works for him.
When things heat up between Jen and Dave, it's only a matter of time before all of her secrets are revealed. Will their tumultuous relationship survive the truth?
I love a good suspense/mystery, and the twists and turns in this book gave me plenty of what I was looking for. I did, however, find the "tech talk" to be somewhat distracting at times. Though I understand the author's desire to show Dave as a tortured soul, for me, his attitude and actions toward Jen and the women he used, made it difficult for me to like him until the very end.
Overall, this was a great read. I will definitely look for more of Ayala's work.
Sample from Chapter 9 - The crack of shattering glass and a loud bang startled her. A hissing sound blew out of a canister. Jen scrambled to her feet with the help of her crutches. Her eyes watered and her lungs burned as if breathing in fire. Gagging and coughing, she stumbled out the front door and dove into the lawn. Her eyes stung, and she quickly plucked out her soft contact lenses. Male voices and footsteps approached.
Sample from Chapter 30 - How could she resist him when her heart was already his, Tender, and tingly, his kisses swirled like a lover's hand, carefully removing layers from her heart, peeling off her defenses, and threatening to undress her soul.
Top reviews from other countries
This book has a sophisticated storyline and good depth of characters, but be aware of the tech talk - although intriguing, it was beyond my understanding, but thankfully it didn't affect my following of the plot. There are some chapters where the pace drops off, and some moments where I got lost, so I was going to give 4 stars. But because I liked Jen, the story wasn't predictable and held me in suspense until in the end, I went for 5 stars.
The story is a brilliant way of telling Love, Betrayal, Hope and Redemption. Based around a computer company. A woman with secrets, a man who wants to know the truth about what happened 6 years ago. Police involved, murder and mayhem.
Will be reading more Rachelle Ayla books in the future.